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Friday, May 14, 2021
Recap from holidays
We were writing about something from are holidays.
I really like your piece of writing that you did. I liked how you put lots of descriptive words and full stops. That was great and I really liked that. But one thing you could do next time is you could put some more adjectives in your writing that would make it wonderful! good piece of writing.
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I really like your piece of writing that you did. I liked how you put lots of descriptive words and full stops. That was great and I really liked that. But one thing you could do next time is you could put some more adjectives in your writing that would make it wonderful! good piece of writing.
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