Friday, May 14, 2021

Recap from holidays

We were writing about something from are holidays.

I found it easy to think of words.

I found it hard to write some words.

I really hope you like it!

1 comment:

  1. I really like your piece of writing that you did. I liked how you put lots of descriptive words and full stops. That was great and I really liked that. But one thing you could do next time is you could put some more adjectives in your writing that would make it wonderful! good piece of writing.

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